Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Script Revision

I believe that I did a good job with most of my dialogue, but I think that this section could use a bit more work.


Tony continues on the freeway towards Tijuana. He is sweating profusely and is visibly terrified. He keeps on rubbing his face nervously. About thirty minutes later he gets a call once again.

I could just say that Tony is extremely nervous and letting the director decide how that is portrayed. 

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