Personal Script

I think that my best scene would be the opening scene where Jorge gets lost and Tony is outside talking to the mysterious unknown man. I think that it was the best because it built up suspense and it set the mood and tone for the rest of the story. I would say that my worst scene would be the ending scene where Tony finds out the entire thing was a hoax. This is the worst scene because I had to change up the entire story due to the limit on the length. If I wasn't restrained I would have written the story as I originally intended it to be.