Xavier Pilot

Format 3
Conflict 3
Characters 3

This is probably the best script that I have read so far in this class. It has a great conflict that not only teenagers can relate to but adults as well. There are no errors in the format and the characters are not just one sided.

Sixth Period Pilot

Format 3
Conflict 2
Characters 2

I like this screenplay. The conflict seems true and interesting and the format is spot on for the most part.

Cheaters

Format 1
Conflict 2
Characters 2

The format of this screenplay was incorrect. The punctuation and capitalization needs some major work.

Psycho Reflection

Psycho's screenplay is very unique. It uses a lot of directions and many descriptions as to what happens and what goes on. The story bounces from location to location. The characters are unique because they are three dimensional and don't only have one side to them. The writer sneaks in many things that without close attention will go unheard. The humor is a sort of dark humor.

Concept 25

One person, one team, one year, Vidal is about to face the challenge of a lifetime as he plays for the school soccer team.

Pilot # 3

Format 2
Characters 2
Conflict 3

I like the fact that modern day teen slang and language was used. I would suggest that the writers focus a bit more on punctuation and the other minor writing mistakes, other than that th conflict might be a little tough to continue in several episodes.

Pilot #1

Format 2
Characters 2
Conflict 3

I would suggest making the transitions a bit smoother and making the story a bit more clearer.